Tuesday, September 20, 2016

Formal Letter Writing

To: Brad Blackstone
From: Heng Sze Dee
Date: 20 September 2016
Subject: Introducing Myself: Educational Background, Interests, Goals & Aims for the Future

Dear Brad,

My name is Heng Sze Dee, 22, a student from your TLM1010 Technical Communication class, in Singapore Institute of Technology (SIT). I am writing this email to introduce more about myself to you. Prior to admission in SIT, I graduated from Ngee Ann Polytechnic (NP), with a Diploma in Business Studies, specialising in Human Capital Management and Psychology. I chose to specialise in these two areas as I was interested in how to better mange human captial in an organisation and the psychology behind it.

During my leisure time, I like to spend time practicing martial arts (Aikido) and enjoying sports, which include badminton, basketball, and rock climbing. Besides all these cardiovascular activities, I also like to watch documentaries on History channel, and a variety of programmes on National Geographic.

My goal for studying Telematics (Intelligent Transportation Systems Engineering) is that I hope to be able to contribute to better improve Singapore's transport industry, by learning the knowledge and skills required. Thus, I will be able to design smoother and safer vehicular systems, for road users and commuters.

My aims for the future are to be able to improve the transportation system, so that it will be easier and less of a hassle to commute around Singapore.

I hope that you will know more about me after reading this introduction about myself. Thank you.


Yours Sincerely,

Heng Sze Dee


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I have commented on Derrick, Jie Lin & Li Fang's blog.
Revised on 30 Sep 2016

6 comments:

  1. Dear Sze Dee,

    I enjoyed reading your post as I got to know more about you. I believe that you will do well in achieving your goal towards designing a smoother and safer vehicular system for commuters.

    Regards,
    Jamie

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    1. Dear Jamie,

      Thank you for your wishes. I hope that we can work together in the future!

      Regards,

      Sze Dee

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  2. Dear Sze Dee,

    I am glad to have read your blog as I found out we have 1 thing in common - To improve the transportation in Singapore! Study hard, and I believe we can work together towards that common goal in the future.

    Best regards,
    Derrick

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    2. Dear Derrick, 

      Let's study hard and work together as a team to fufill our goal in the future!

      Regards,

      Sze Dee

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  3. Thanks very much, Sze Dee, for this clear, concise and yet comprehensive introductory letter. You do an admirable job presenting your study background, your interests and your goals. We even learn why studying telematics appeals to you.

    Your language use is superb, with only one minor need for revision:

    --- My goals for studying ... is .... >>> (subject verb disagreement)

    I look forward to working with you this term

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